The Winning Chapter

Many thanks to all of you who took the time to read my two sample first pages. For a while, it was neck and neck with Sample 1 and Sample 2. But in the end, Sample 1 pulled away with the win. I hope you enjoy the revisions you helped me with and the rest of the chapter (click on Chapter 1 below). This has been one of the best learning experiences... read more

First Pages

Many of you know that in addition to writing my blog, I am also working on a novel. After many years, I’m on my sixth revision and close to the end of this process. However, I’m not sure where to start the book. Critics say “Start in the middle or start with action.” So with that in mind, I’m going to preview two potential first... read more

Eliza Lovell Tibbets, Citrus Queen

On a recent visit to Riverside, I stopped to get reacquainted with the fabulous Eliza Tibbets sculpture. It is located in the downtown pedestrian area around the corner from the Mission Inn Hotel (which is worth a visit or overnight stay if you’re in the area). The statue, created by Guy A. Wilson, was unveiled in 2011 and is the first statue in... read more

The Swizzle Dilemma

While watching a soccer match at the Hotel Eiger bar in Murren, I noticed sexy lady swizzle sticks in the glasses the men were drinking from. When the server approached, I grabbed one of the swizzle sticks, pointed it at him, and said, “This is very sexist, and I am offended.” The server smiled, “What would you like to drink? You will get a... read more

The Hallmark Cult

Okay, maybe cult is too strong a word, but something weird is going on at my local Hallmark store. On a random weekday at lunchtime, I strolled in looking for a Belle birthday card for a Disney princess party.There are three cashiers at their registers, and the store is full of ladies. I can’t remember when I’ve seen three cashiers working... read more