Many thanks to all of you who took the time to read my two sample first pages. For a while, it was neck and neck with Sample 1 and Sample 2. But in the end, Sample 1 pulled away with the win.
I hope you enjoy the revisions you helped me with and the rest of the chapter (click on Chapter 1 below). This has been one of the best learning experiences I’ve had on my writing journey.
Chapter 1
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